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Alone Again by =mormonchick1005:iconmormonchick1005:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


My dear precious friend,
I'm alone again tonight.

And I hate it.
I hate it when you don't have time to talk.
I hate it when you're so busy.
I hate it when you can't stop long enough to say "I love you".
I hate it when you seem so far away.
I hate it when I feel so lonely I can't sleep.

You have a loving family, a permanent home, so many friends.
You are encircled by so much love every day.
I hate it when you forget that I'm not so lucky.
I hate it when you forget that all I have is you.

I wish you knew how much I need you tonight.
I wish you were here.
I wish you could wrap me in a blanket.
I wish you could cradle me like a child.
I wish you could kiss the burning, empty spot on my forehead where your lips belong.

I wish you could stay with me until I fell asleep.

Most of all, I wish you could still be there when I wake up.
©2008 =mormonchick1005
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I know it's not her fault, but that doesn't make it any easier.

PLEASE READ BEFORE COMMENTING:
To anyone who will respond immediately with some reassurance that God is with me-- yes, I know that. But I am a sixteen-year-old. We sixteen-year-olds have very few rights in society, but one of our precious few is the right to be angsty. Tonight, I am exercising that right.

So do not try to reassure me with any religious statement. I find that to be highly patronizing when I am trying to rant.
Do not tell me it could be worse, or that everything happens for a reason. I will kick you in the virtual shins and then hide your comment.
Do not remind me that it is not my friend's fault that being a junior in college is very demanding. I know that. I am not angry with her. I do not hate her. I love her with all of my heart. I am just frustrated with circumstances.
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=forbiddenhero:iconforbiddenhero: May 3, 2008, 9:43:50 PM
Wow. I love it when someone writes their heart out. This is very passionate.

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Grab the cookies. We attack at dawn. Satan will pay.
Forbidden Hero...Making what we love....I think
Roaner Chapter 1
~kayleebuttons:iconkayleebuttons: May 4, 2008, 8:01:15 AM
Wow, sweetie, that's so deep and I understand your frustrating. Wish I could help.

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"You say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one." John Lennon
~mylovelyghost:iconmylovelyghost: May 4, 2008, 3:22:07 PM
Wow, I love it how you wrote this^_^

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Real ninjas.....

GO COMMANDO IN PUBLIC!!!
:ninja:
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~Sister-Nightroad7:iconSister-Nightroad7: May 4, 2008, 6:38:26 PM
I wish i could help in her place, but unfortunately i'm in the same hard and dark place as you. Any help i'd try to give might end up hurting.

Sorry luv. Well done though.

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-Watari ~bishie-stalker-club
-Zeniba *The-Disney-Directory
-Ms.Z ~DeathnoteXalphabeT
I want nothing more than to destroy you from the inside out! :heart:
~Mistifear:iconMistifear: May 4, 2008, 7:00:55 PM
Awesome piece! You expressed your angst well, and without sounding too "teenage angsty" Very eloquent, I believe.

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I need you
I need you here
I need you now
I need security somehow
I need you
Like you would not believe
You're the only thing I want
Cause you're everything I need
~"I Need You" by Relient K~
~Cryozenthia:iconCryozenthia: May 5, 2008, 9:44:47 AM
Very beautiful. I kind of feel that way myself, although, my situation's a little different.

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-*-My parents told me I could be anything I wanted to be, so I decided to become a ninja.-*-
~Tainted-And-Insane:iconTainted-And-Insane: May 5, 2008, 8:16:28 PM
so i won't say any of those things you dont want us to say.

i will :hug: and say i hope it gets better soon. also as always nice poem.

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Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising ever time we do. - Confusius
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