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The song that guided me through the fire of my early days
Through the blood, and through all the broken tears
There was a voice that pierced the screams with tenderness
There was a song within me all those years

"Baby you will never be alone
Baby you've got so much strength inside you
Baby don't cry
Just close your pretty little eyes
Baby I'm right there, right beside you"

And in my heart that song was all that kept my soul alive
It was all the beauty I could find in the world
There were scars, there were nights I sang the tears away
I didn't know the song but my heart could feel the words

"Baby you will never be alone
Baby you've got so much strength inside you
Baby don't cry
Just close your pretty little eyes
Baby I'm right there, right beside you"

And then came the day I found the voice that had sung to me
And your beautiful green eyes, and your heart, my spirit's home
And my heart beating against yours was the awkward harmony
To the song I heard within you, the song I'd always known

"Baby you were never alone
Can you feel the strength growing inside you?
Baby let me hold you, baby I love you
There's no need to cry
Baby look into my eyes
And listen to my heart beat, I'm beside you"
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~Sister-Nightroad7:iconSister-Nightroad7: May 11, 2008, 9:43:52 PM
FOR CHRIST'S SAKE GIRL!!! STOP MAKING ME CRY WITH YOUR POETRY!!!

No, seriously now. You hit home pretty dern hard this time dear. Any more of this and i may have to go to the Emergency Room for a figuratively broken heart.

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I want nothing more than to destroy you from the inside out! :heart:
~kayleebuttons:iconkayleebuttons: May 12, 2008, 5:33:01 AM
Ya hit home, girl. Jeez, man....... Your poetry brings me close to tears.

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"You say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one." John Lennon
=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 12, 2008, 9:58:03 AM Mood: Love
your poetry is some of the most emotional that i have read in a long time, i mean even more than the one i watch that i thought was an emotional writer. great job!

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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=mormonchick1005:iconmormonchick1005: May 12, 2008, 4:30:15 PM
Well, it's all in finding the perfect muse, and looking into her eyes and allowing the words to be drawn raw from your heart.

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"These are the days that I've been missing
Give me the taste, give me the joy of summer wine
These are the days that bring new meaning
I feel the stillness of the sun and I feel fine"
=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: May 12, 2008, 6:34:04 PM
true, true.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have Rawem0tion* :blackrose:
~seritha:iconseritha: May 16, 2008, 11:51:13 AM
I seriously think I could cry, like I said I never understood any poetry until I read yours. It just hits home and you can just FEEL the emotions behind those words ^^

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"The most powerful force in the universe is the power to hope, because without it, you were lost, but with it, you could do anything.
~narutorox2:iconnarutorox2: Jun 18, 2008, 11:46:39 AM
wow that is really good, and emotional

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