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South Carolina Summer by ~mormonchick1005:iconmormonchick1005:



An orchestra of crickets
Complements the tree frogs’ band
The symphony of nature speaks
To the notebook in my hand

The ground is wet and cool now
From the rain this afternoon
The wet magnolias glitter
In reflection of the moon

My feet sink into damp red clay
As I remove my shoes
The Carolina morning breaks
As mountains fill my view
©2007-2009 ~mormonchick1005
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A dorky poem about a sunrise in South Carolina

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:icondefloweredvirgin:
This is lovely. I adore the nature too.
You're not sixteen yet? (Saw that in your profile.) That's quite a talent. You have a long way to go. Keep up!

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:icontransient-orca:
Beautiful writing, I can't believe your only 16 and already writing like this.

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:iconmormonchick1005:
I'm 15.

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:iconcarlomarx:
You are wonderful. :D
:icontransient-orca:
Oh, sorry. I forgot you said, "Almost Sweet Sixteen"

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:iconsister-nightroad7:
IT IS NOT DORKY!!!!!!! i happen to like it...very much, i really like the first paragraph, or segment...or whatever you call it...i'm no poet, but YOU DEFINATELY ARE!

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:iconsmex0r-pot-thing:
gorgeous.
really.
really.
great.

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:icondurloth:
"The symphony of nature" is a beautiful idiom and shows clearly that you watch the processes around you very carefully. You're definitely talented.

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:iconuomo-87:
I really liked it. =)

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